Earlier this past summer, I asked if there were any questions people wanted to ask editors. One of the questions, posed by Carrie was: “Is there such a thing as a MS that’s been critted/polished to death?” The answer is yes, emphatically yes.
When I read this question, I was reminded of a blog post I wrote over 3 years ago, for the now-closed blog, Romancing the Blog. I went searching for that post, and you can read it in its entirety here, but I’ll snip part of it here for you:
The one-manuscript author. I’ll bet most of you know or have known a fellow writer like this. Someone who wrote a book. One book. Finished it. Polished it. Maybe rewrote it once or twice (or ten times) to fit the genre trends. At one time it was a paranormal. No wait, an erotic romance. No, a paranormal inspirational. It’s been entered into every contest known to the romance industry and had to be retired from the contest circuit because the judges now recognize it by the opening line.
This is one example of a manuscript that can be polished or critiqued “to death”. It’s the manuscript that’s had so many versions, that the author has worked on for so long and concentrated solely on, that it’s lost all sense of the author’s voice. It’s lost its soul.
I frequent a few writers’ forums, and it’s not unusual to see an author post wondering when it’s time to let go of a manuscript, or that they’re afraid of letting it go. Some authors get past this, but some think maybe…maybe they should wait. Change just one more thing. Fiddle with that wording just a little bit more. And they lose perspective, they have no distance from the manuscript and finally, the edits they make don’t improve the book…they just change the book. And not always for the better.
I suspect that, for an author, sometimes it’s difficult to know that happy medium between editing enough and over-editing. How do you know? Here’s a few things to think about:
* After you’ve written the book, set it aside for a few weeks and then edit. It will give you some necessary distance from the words and the story, and help you see what’s there instead of what’s in your head.
* Editing shouldn’t take only a few hours, but it also shouldn’t take months (or years). If you’re still fiddling with the words months after you typed “the end” then you’re probably running the risk of over-editing.
*If you’re researching and implementing every writing rule ever hinted at, you might run the risk of killing your natural voice. Should you be conscious of your use of certain things like adverbs, dialogue tags and POV. Sure. Should you edit out every “violation” of the rule in your manuscript? Probably not.
*On the other hand: Be bold, but not too bold. Breaking every “rule” isn’t necessarily going to reflect positively either.
*Don’t edit so much that you stop loving the story. If you don’t love it, why should an editor or agent?
*Don’t let fear rule you. If you never decide it’s ready to send, you won’t hear “no.” But you’ll never hear “yes” either.

