I don’t know about other writers, but since I was a child I put myself to sleep by telling stories. These mental movies were almost always romances from the time I was young. Of course, back then they might feature that great romantic couple tragically separated by looming puberty–Peter Pan and Wendy. Come to think of it, the wild boy who defies taming even as he longs for it is still a storyline I really enjoy.
Now that I write “for a living”, I find that sometimes when I start to slip into that sweet, sleepy subconscious state, drifting along with the story, my logical brain starts to seize hold and try to shape it into something writeable. Let me tell you, sleep evaporates when the rational brain kicks in so I try to keep Bonnie’s sleepytime ritual and actual planning for a novel somewhat separate.
The idea for Captive Bride first came to me as I lay in bed in a cabin about five years ago. I told myself a cross-cultural love story while listening to creepy animal noises in the woods outside. When I got home from vacation I jotted down the general outline which went into my ideas file. It stayed there for about a year while I pursued other projects. The story of brave Huiann, facing marriage to an unknown man in a foreign land, was not dead but merely resting.
Once I started real work on the story, I couldn’t put it down. I’m a sucker for the wounded warrior archetype so I made my hero a Civil War veteran suffering from post traumatic stress. As Huiann escapes the prison her future has become—forced to whore for a tong boss, Alan must also escape the prison in his mind caused by wartime experiences.
This story went through many rewrites. It was once suggested to me that readers couldn’t believe in real love forming between two people who don’t speak the same language, but to me a big part of their connection is beyond words. I absolutely love focusing on the extra effort required when people have to struggle to communicate and have used that theme in past works: Jungle Heat, A Hearing Heart and Bone Deep.
I was also told that a storekeeper wasn’t a sexy enough occupation for a hero. But as Forrest Gump’s mother would say “sexy is as sexy does” and I have no problem with a man who is simply a decent, steady, somewhat tormented fellow trying to get on with his life. Alpha Male He-Man is not a type I particularly enjoy. Thank heavens for my Carina editor, Deb, believing in my vision for the story.
I hope readers like resourceful, pragmatic, self-actuating Huiann as much as I enjoyed writing her. I think she maintains a lot of grace under pressure, biding her time and waiting patiently for an opportunity to strike out for freedom. I believe readers will find Xie Fuaha, the tong boss, to be satisfyingly villainous. Hey man, he’s just a businessman making a living selling weapons, drugs and prostitutes. Have times changed at all?
Also, I want to publicly state I did NOT see the movie Thousand Pieces of Gold until after I’d finished this manuscript. It’s pretty upsetting when you see a movie or read a book which closely aligns with something you’ve written, especially when the other work came first. The hero in Thousand Pieces is also a Civil War vet and former prisoner-of-war in notorious Andersonville. But I promise you, I invented Alan’s background on my own. If you love historicals, you should watch this movie. I first caught it on the Hallmark channel so it does come around occasionally or you can put it in your Netflix queue. Click on above link for movie description.
My journey from a sleepy daydream to publication evolved over a long period of time and I hope you will join that journey as it comes to fruition. Now I have a question for you. When I was young, I used to worry that it was really weird that I told myself stories. Now that I’m an adult, I’m pretty sure everybody fantasizes in some way. Am I right? How do you bridge the gap between wake and sleep?
Here’s a short excerpt from the opening of Captive Bride:
1870, off the California coast
Clouds were painted on the flat blue-gray sky, not even a gull disturbing the barren heavens. From great black stacks, ribbons of white billowed behind the rapidly moving ship. Although the steamer cut steadily through the waves, it seemed it wasn’t moving at all—as though Huiann would spend the rest of her life standing on this deck, waiting for her new life to begin.
When she imagined meeting her husband for the first time, she wavered between nervous anticipation and wrenching fear. Was he handsome, ugly, old, young? Would he treat her gently and listen to her thoughts or expect her to keep silent about her ideas as she tended his house? She hadn’t been allowed to ask such questions when her parents announced she was to be a bride.
Huiann’s parents had found their three daughters husbands one by one, but by the time it was her turn, the family’s prosperity was depleted. So when prosperous American businessman Xie Fuhua sent his agent Lui Dai to secure a bride from the home country and the man spotted Huiann walking in the park, it was considered a miraculous blessing.
“The gods have favored my employer, Xie Fuhua, with riches to match his name,” Lui Dai explained to Huiann’s father. “Any family would be lucky to make such an alliance. With your daughter’s favorable face and family name, she’ll be the perfect bride for him.”
“Our ancestors smile on us today! Such a husband will give you a secure future,” her mother assured her, and in less time than it took to steep tea, the contract was signed and sealed, along with Huiann’s fate. She was to be married to the illustrious Xie Fuhua upon her arrival in San Francisco.
Although Huiann had always dreamed of traveling to foreign lands, faced with the reality her heart ached for Suzhou, her beautiful town on the Yangtze, which she might never see again. Her parents would rest with their ancestors by Lake Taihu while she would be buried far from home.
What would her new home be like? Would her in-laws accept her into their family with warm embraces or be disappointed in the bride their son had acquired from China? A mother-in-law could make her new daughter’s life heaven or hell on earth. And with Huiann’s impatient nature, she was quite likely to do something to earn chastisement and bring shame upon her family name. It was as inevitable as the west wind blowing.





But I did it… wrote a novella in one month: 16,000 plus words. And as a result, The Last Days of a Rake is being offered as a free download, so that readers of Love & Scandal will have a better idea of what Charles Jameson related to in the book, that made him want to meet the author.