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Between Wake and Sleep

Captive BrideI don’t know about other writers, but since I was a child I put myself to sleep by telling stories. These mental movies were almost always romances from the time I was young. Of course, back then they might feature that great romantic couple tragically separated by looming puberty–Peter Pan and Wendy. Come to think of it, the wild boy who defies taming even as he longs for it is still a storyline I really enjoy.

Now that I write “for a living”, I find that sometimes when I start to slip into that sweet, sleepy subconscious state, drifting along with the story, my logical brain starts to seize hold and try to shape it into something writeable. Let me tell you, sleep evaporates when the rational brain kicks in so I try to keep Bonnie’s sleepytime ritual and actual planning for a novel somewhat separate.

The idea for Captive Bride first came to me as I lay in bed in a cabin about five years ago. I told myself a cross-cultural love story while listening to creepy animal noises in the woods outside. When I got home from vacation I jotted down the general outline which went into my ideas file. It stayed there for about a year while I pursued other projects. The story of brave Huiann, facing marriage to an unknown man in a foreign land, was not dead but merely resting.

Once I started real work on the story, I couldn’t put it down. I’m a sucker for the wounded warrior archetype so I made my hero a Civil War veteran suffering from post traumatic stress. As Huiann escapes the prison her future has become—forced to whore for a tong boss, Alan must also escape the prison in his mind caused by wartime experiences.

This story went through many rewrites. It was once suggested to me that readers couldn’t believe in real love forming between two people who don’t speak the same language, but to me a big part of their connection is beyond words. I absolutely love focusing on the extra effort required when people have to struggle to communicate and have used that theme in past works: Jungle Heat, A Hearing Heart and Bone Deep.

I was also told that a storekeeper wasn’t a sexy enough occupation for a hero. But as Forrest Gump’s mother would say “sexy is as sexy does” and I have no problem with a man who is simply a decent, steady, somewhat tormented fellow trying to get on with his life. Alpha Male He-Man is not a type I particularly enjoy. Thank heavens for my Carina editor, Deb, believing in my vision for the story.

I hope readers like resourceful, pragmatic, self-actuating Huiann as much as I enjoyed writing her. I think she maintains a lot of grace under pressure, biding her time and waiting patiently for an opportunity to strike out for freedom. I believe readers will find Xie Fuaha, the tong boss, to be satisfyingly villainous. Hey man, he’s just a businessman making a living selling weapons, drugs and prostitutes. Have times changed at all?

Also, I want to publicly state I did NOT see the movie Thousand Pieces of Gold until after I’d finished this manuscript. It’s pretty upsetting when you see a movie or read a book which closely aligns with something you’ve written, especially when the other work came first. The hero in Thousand Pieces is also a Civil War vet and former prisoner-of-war in notorious Andersonville. But I promise you, I invented Alan’s background on my own. If you love historicals, you should watch this movie. I first caught it on the Hallmark channel so it does come around occasionally or you can put it in your Netflix queue. Click on above link for movie description.

My journey from a sleepy daydream to publication evolved over a long period of time and I hope you will join that journey as it comes to fruition. Now I have a question for you. When I was young, I used to worry that it was really weird that I told myself stories. Now that I’m an adult, I’m pretty sure everybody fantasizes in some way. Am I right? How do you bridge the gap between wake and sleep?

Here’s a short excerpt from the opening of Captive Bride:

1870, off the California coast

Clouds were painted on the flat blue-gray sky, not even a gull disturbing the barren heavens. From great black stacks, ribbons of white billowed behind the rapidly moving ship. Although the steamer cut steadily through the waves, it seemed it wasn’t moving at all—as though Huiann would spend the rest of her life standing on this deck, waiting for her new life to begin.

When she imagined meeting her husband for the first time, she wavered between nervous anticipation and wrenching fear. Was he handsome, ugly, old, young? Would he treat her gently and listen to her thoughts or expect her to keep silent about her ideas as she tended his house? She hadn’t been allowed to ask such questions when her parents announced she was to be a bride.

Huiann’s parents had found their three daughters husbands one by one, but by the time it was her turn, the family’s prosperity was depleted. So when prosperous American businessman Xie Fuhua sent his agent Lui Dai to secure a bride from the home country and the man spotted Huiann walking in the park, it was considered a miraculous blessing.

“The gods have favored my employer, Xie Fuhua, with riches to match his name,” Lui Dai explained to Huiann’s father. “Any family would be lucky to make such an alliance. With your daughter’s favorable face and family name, she’ll be the perfect bride for him.”

“Our ancestors smile on us today! Such a husband will give you a secure future,” her mother assured her, and in less time than it took to steep tea, the contract was signed and sealed, along with Huiann’s fate. She was to be married to the illustrious Xie Fuhua upon her arrival in San Francisco.

Although Huiann had always dreamed of traveling to foreign lands, faced with the reality her heart ached for Suzhou, her beautiful town on the Yangtze, which she might never see again. Her parents would rest with their ancestors by Lake Taihu while she would be buried far from home.

What would her new home be like? Would her in-laws accept her into their family with warm embraces or be disappointed in the bride their son had acquired from China? A mother-in-law could make her new daughter’s life heaven or hell on earth. And with Huiann’s impatient nature, she was quite likely to do something to earn chastisement and bring shame upon her family name. It was as inevitable as the west wind blowing.

Aiming for a Sense of Place

One of the things I want in a historical is a sense of place as well as a strong sense of time. In Lion of Kent, most of the action takes place in Sir Robert’s household and the surrounding woodlands, so—like many historical writers—we had to ‘build’ an imaginary castle. The best way to convey a sense of place is, of course, to write about a real location, tweaked accordingly to fit the status of our twelfth century lord.

Now, the UK has more castles than there are days in the year, with constructions ranging from scrappy baileys with collapsing walls to earthworks to massive fortresses still inhabited by nobility. Some of them are even in Kent. However, the castle I used as a model for Sir Robert’s household was Warkworth Castle in Northumberland, a place I’d visited back in February.

Lion of Kent is set in 1176, and though Warkworth Castle was constructed at a slightly later date, the basics of medieval castle building changed little in the interim. Warkworth was laid out around 1180-1200 by Roger fitz Roger and developed by its subsequent owners, the powerful Percy family, earls (later dukes) of Northumberland. The great tower was built for the first earl in 1377 by the master mason of Durham Cathedral, and it’s the interior of the great tower that provided the inspiration for a pivotal moment in the story. In this snippet, the hero, young squire William Raven, is returning to the festivities in the great hall when he hears an odd noise:

As he made his way back to the great hall, William heard a sound. He stopped, listening, filtering out the shouts and music from the hall and the hum of noise from the kitchens. At length the strange sound came again, and this time he identified it as two men speaking in urgent whispers. Curious as to who had slipped out of the hall or kitchen for a conversation, William followed the whispers around the dark walls.

The corridor narrowed and made a dog-leg, then opened out again near the central light well that ran for the full height of the keep. On each floor two windows overlooked the light well, which provided illumination and fresh air to what would otherwise be the darkest, stuffiest rooms in the castle. Now William understood why the voices sounded so strange—they were distorted by an echo.

William approached the window that opened into the light well, keeping to the shadows so he wouldn’t be seen by the whisperers. He angled himself against the recess of the window and peered up, wondering if the voices came from Sir Robert’s private chambers or the guest rooms above.

Another low murmur, and William drew back. The men were standing directly opposite him on the other side of the light well. From the direction of their voices, the whisperers must be standing in the lower part of the chapel, the section reserved for the household servants. It was as good a place as any for a clandestine meeting, and he wondered who they were and what they were doing.

Light wells are often used in castles not just to provide daylight for interior rooms, but also to collect rainwater to sluice out latrines. Visitors often don’t realise the light wells exist—and certainly I’d never paid any attention to them before!—but the construction of the great tower at Warkworth made a real feature of the light well, which does indeed have a window from a corridor looking across the light well into the chapel.

This is the castle chapel from the direction of the light well—you can see the corbels that originally supported the balcony/mezzanine floor where the lord and his family would have gathered to worship, and at the front you can see the piscina and the edge of the sedile as well as the dais for the high altar. The sacristy is tucked away just to the right. You can see how narrow the chapel is—now imagine it full of household servants. At the height of the Percy’s power, Warkworth had a permanent staff of 166. Our fictional Sir Robert would of course have far fewer servants and retainers, but even so, it’d be quite a crowd!

Throughout Lion of Kent we’ve tried to give a flavour of the hustle and bustle of daily life in a castle, from the food and drink on the table to the procedure for bath times to a knighting ceremony to the various types of entertainment—singing and dancing as well as that most masculine of entertainments, the hunt. We hope you’ll join us in sharing the medieval experience.

- Kate Cotoner (www.katecotoner.co.uk)

Finding the story in history

My professor was a storyteller. He was a huge inspiration, even if we were slightly scared of him. He’d lunge at you in the small room, point a finger and ask a random question about the Middle Ages. I’ll never forget when it was my turn, first week of my studies: “Who were the Salians?”

I blinked, shocked after having escaped the hugely crowded law studies auditoriums. There was a professor that not only saw me but addressed me, asking a question. What the hell?

My response “a dynasty” was as startled as automatic. I’ve always been into the Middle Ages and read a lot before I’d embarked on the “breadless” subject of Medieval and Ancient History, despite my family moaning about how they didn’t respect me for dropping out of law (having a lawyer in the family could have saved them a lot of money after all).

It was something of a received wisdom to “sit well to the back” in Professor H’s lectures. He’d do that. Sit down on your table and grill you. He radiated boundless energy, sheer glee at his topic, true passion, which can be overwhelming when you’re a first semester still trying to work out what dishes in the canteen are actually edible and which should be avoided at all costs, whereas the other professors were true academics – dry, razor sharp and much more concerned with dates and factual accuracy than what people were like, what they thought and felt.

Over my studies, I was constantly drawn to Professor H’s lectures. It was not only the topics – he did a lot of social history and history of ‘mentality’ – how people and certain groups thought and saw themselves – but the way he delivered the lectures. Walking around, talking like an ancient orator, discussing with himself as much as with us, and asking questions. I remember him telling a story about a duke and a king and a duchess, and the duchess leaving the duke for the king. He got really worked up about this, voice vibrating with emotion, face flushed, saying things like “How could she?” and “That faithless bastard.” I only later learnt that he was going through a difficult divorce himself.

He was the only professor who thought that fiction was a legitimate way to talk about history. “There’s “story” in “history”, you know,” he said one day in the canteen. (In German, “Geschichte” – history – and “Geschichte” – story – is the same word). He was the only professor whom I told that I was writing historical novels. The others sniffed at the idea of leaving the purity of facts behind and asking “what if”?

Back then, I wanted to be a serious historian, and they told you that fiction was not serious. Certainly not serious history. But I just couldn’t help getting inspired by a throwaway comment of Professor H’s. I can now confess that my frantic scribbling in his lectures wasn’t note-taking.

In many ways, Professor H, with his reckless passion and hard questions, was the inspiration behind writing historical fiction. I wondered about the people that had no voice, who lived in the cracks of medieval society, whose life depended on keeping their loves hidden, and how they still managed to stay true to themselves and find a way to live. Those questions turned into stories.

Fourteen years separate “Who were the Salians?” from Lion of Kent. I left university with a degree that wasn’t quite as breadless as my family expected, even though I left academia – and didn’t, because I’ve taken all my history books and keep buying more.

I still sometimes email Professor H, and his passion is still as alive as it was back then. It’s heartening to think that he’ll sit on a first semester’s table and ask them unexpected questions, and that he’ll inspire more writers to move beyond pure facts and find the story in history.

- Aleksandr Voinov
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An excerpt from The Sergeant’s Lady

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For my last post today, I wanted to share a brief excerpt from The Sergeant’s Lady.  It’s from Chapter 5, in the aftermath of my hero and heroine’s first kiss:

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The next morning they prepared to march while dawn was but a faint hope of light. As teamsters hitched their oxen and soldiers bustled about, Anna waited by a wagon, conversing politely with one of the wounded, an artillery lieutenant she had met several months ago in winter quarters.

Footsteps approached behind her, a tread already familiar. “Mrs. Arrington, ma’am?”

Never before had she heard Sergeant Atkins sound so tentative. She turned to face him, straightening her bonnet and smoothing her dress. “Yes, Sergeant?”

“May I have a word with you, if you please?”

“Of course.” She swallowed and forced a smile. “Lieutenant Ellis, if you’ll excuse me.”

He smiled back, inoffensively flirtatious. “As long as you promise to visit me again soon.”

She agreed and followed Sergeant Atkins to the edge of the rough road. They were in plain sight of the hurrying soldiers, teamsters and orderlies, but in the dim light and bustle of preparation, they were inconspicuous.

For a moment they surveyed each other in strained silence. There was something different about him. It puzzled her briefly, but then she realized it was his uniform. She’d never seen him look so correct before. His green jacket was buttoned all the way up to his throat where his black stock was neatly fastened. That distracting saber scar of his, which last night she had imagined tracing with her tongue, was hidden. No bare head or jaunty foraging cap today; instead he wore his tall shako. Even his shoes looked as though he’d given them a polish, and his red-and-black sash—like his stripes, a mark of his rank—was carefully knotted and settled just above his lean hips with geometric precision. A lump formed in her throat. He looked like a model for a toy soldier.

He stared past her. “Mrs. Arrington, ma’am,” he said with the air of a rehearsed speech, “I owe you an apology for my behavior last night. I took advantage of you. I’m ashamed of it, and it won’t happen again.”

“Don’t apologize,” she blurted. How could he be the one apologizing when it was her fault? Their eyes met, and she swallowed hard. She’d never seen more beautiful eyes on a man, so golden and intent.

He narrowed them. “But I kissed you. I had no right—”

Her gaze dropped to his lips. “I kissed you back,” she murmured, then wished the words unsaid. He must realize she had hardly been a passive recipient of his attentions, but she cursed her wayward tongue for acknowledging it so openly.

His parade-ground posture relaxed a trifle, and he was recognizably her Sergeant Atkins again. She released the breath she hadn’t meant to hold. But he shook his head. “We can’t let it happen again.”

She closed her eyes. “I know.” She looked at him again and forced herself to speak in a level voice. “But do not insult me by apologizing for something that was as much my doing as yours. I wish it hadn’t happened, because I wanted you for my friend on this journey, and now—” she spread her hands, “—it’s impossible. I’m sorry.”

He smiled, achingly wistful. “If I’m not allowed to apologize, neither are you.”

“That wasn’t an apology. That was regret.”

“Oh.” Abruptly his eyes widened, his nostrils flared slightly, and he turned stiff and correct again. “Lieutenant Montmorency.”

Anna whirled around to discover the young officer watching them from no more than four feet away, his expression hovering between accusation and bewilderment.

“Has Sergeant Atkins been disturbing you, ma’am?” he asked.

Anna thought quickly. What explanation could she give for the inappropriate familiarity that had doubtless been obvious to this interloper? “Not at all, Lieutenant,” she said. “He only asked me if I could think of anything to make the journey easier for Juana, since it is so soon after her confinement.” She turned back to Sergeant Atkins and tried to infuse her voice with both the warmth of friendship and the coolness of superior rank. “And I shall be glad to do anything I can.”

Something flickered in his eyes—amusement? Admiration? “Thank you, ma’am. You’re very kind.”

“Very well, then. Sergeant, Lieutenant, I bid you good morning.” She walked slowly toward her donkey, her head held high, her mind in a whirl.
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Why I write warriors

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I didn’t grow up as an Army brat, but my family has a long tradition of military service. My father enlisted in the Army after high school and was stationed in West Germany for two years before coming home to marry my mother. (Remember West Germany and the Cold War? That world is starting to seem almost as distant as the eras I choose for my stories!) One of my older brothers is a former Marine, and another started West Point the same year I started kindergarten. (Believe it or not, he’s my youngest older brother. I was my parents’ surprise unexpected bonus child when they thought they were done!)

Going back through the generations, my ancestors fought in the Civil War, the American Revolution, and who knows what conflicts before that–since I’m part Scottish, English, and French, it’s entirely possible I had ancestors on both sides of many of the battles I read about in history class.

So I come by my interest in military history honestly, but the soldier who was most on my mind and heart during the creation of The Sergeant’s Lady was my oldest nephew. He’s an officer in the National Guard, and when I wrote my first draft, he was stationed in Iraq. When I decided to submit to Carina, he was serving in Afghanistan, arriving home a month to the day before the book sold. Writing a soldier hero was a way to honor him and men like him. Tactics, technology, and uniforms change, but courage and honor are constants.

Incidentally, when I say that technology changes, I don’t just mean the obvious things like weaponry. While Nathan was in Afghanistan, every time I heard about something horrible happening there, I’d rush to Facebook to check how recently he’d updated his status. Two centuries ago I would’ve had to wait weeks or months.

Back when I was first writing The Sergeant’s Lady, I decided that if it ever sold, I would donate a portion of my royalties to a group providing help to soldiers or veterans in need. At the risk of drifting into political territory, I think as a society we’re all too often better at flag-waving than at any kind of tangible show of gratitude to the men and women who sacrifice so much for their country.

I’ve decided to donate to the Yellow Ribbon Fund, an organization that provides services, lodging, and activities for injured service members and their families at Walter Reed and Bethesda Naval Hospital. I hope some of my readers will consider supporting them or a similar organization as well. Because wars change, but warriors don’t.

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Early influences

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Hi, I’m Susanna Fraser, and I’m delighted that my debut historical romance, The Sergeant’s Lady, is available on virtual bookshelves this week.

One of the many things I love about working with Carina is their enthusiasm for historicals that travel off the beaten path in one way or another.  To name just two examples, there’s Liz Fichera’s Captive Spirit, featuring a Native American heroine in what is now Arizona at the very beginning of European contact, and Carrie Lofty’s Song of Seduction, starring musicians in 1804 Austria.

The Sergeant’s Lady takes place in 1811-12.  The hero is English, the heroine, Scottish.  So far, so typically Regency, right?  Not exactly.  The vast majority of the action takes place with Wellington’s army fighting the French on the Iberian Peninsula.  And the hero, Will Atkins, is a common sergeant.  Not a long-lost heir to a title, not a gentleman slumming, but an outwardly ordinary man who ran away to join the army as a youth out of an abiding curiosity to discover what lay beyond the hills surrounding his native village.

Why did this story call to me?  I believe its roots go back to the very first romances I read back in high school: Sunfire YA historicals and traditional Regencies.

For those of you who don’t remember the Sunfire line, each book featured a sixteen-year-old heroine living through a compelling piece of American history, anywhere from Jamestown right on up to Pearl Harbor.  I liked them better than contemporary YA romances because instead of just going to high school and hoping a boy would notice her, like I was doing myself, the heroine got to do big things and witness important events.  Her choices could have life-or-death consequences, and the book almost always ended with her engaged to marry the hero.  The stakes were higher, there was scope for adventure, and I loved that.

Many Sunfires featured romance across class and/or cultural barriers.  I honestly never even realized this before I sat down to write this blog post, but all my favorites featured an upper-class girl with a more “blue collar” boy, from genteel Marilee falling for her brother’s indentured servant at Jamestown to spoiled Amanda learning to be strong and self-reliant from farmer boy Ben on the Oregon Trail to society girl Nicole daring to love steerage immigrant Karl on the Titanic.  (If you’re thinking that sounds a lot like the James Cameron movie you’d be right, but the Sunfire book predates it by a decade or so.)

At the same time I was buying almost every Sunfire as soon as it came out, I was starting to read traditional Regency romances because they were the only adult romances I could bring home without my mother looking askance at the covers.  I enjoyed the picture they painted of a world so unlike my own and was fascinated whenever they hinted at the big events going on then, especially the Napoleonic Wars.  My favorite heroes were soldiers. If a book was actually set with Wellington’s army in Spain or at the Congress of Vienna or in Brussels during the run-up to Waterloo, so much the better.  Those books were rare, but they gave me the same adventure and high stakes that I loved in my Sunfires.

The Sergeant’s Lady is a good bit sexier than the books I cut my romance-reading teeth on, but other than that, if you tossed my favorite Sunfires in a blender with my favorite trad Regencies, you’d get something very like The Sergeant’s Lady.  Aristocratic heroine and common hero finding love and adventure in a dangerous world, but also having to defy the strict social conventions of the Regency.  And maybe it’s not all that surprising that I’m still telling the same kind of stories I fell in love with as a teen.

What about you?  Do you still look for stories that remind you of the books that sparked your love of reading and of romance?  And do you enjoy historicals that take on unusual settings and themes?  What are some of your favorites?  Or is there a unique setting you wish an author would try?

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The Last Days of a Rake

The Last Days of a Rake

The Book at the Heart of Love & Scandal!

I was intrigued when Angela and Gina at Carina Press came to me with an idea.

What if, they said, we could offer readers the book that is the centerpiece of Love & Scandal? What if readers could also read The Last Days of a Rake, for FREE!?

Not being too slow on the uptake, I asked, “So you mean you want me to write The Last Days of a Rake?”

“Who else?” they patiently asked.

“But,” I whined, “I think Collette may be a better writer than I am. And… and…” Picture me thinking, kinda like Rodin’s sculpture, only not so nude. “I’d actually get to write this book that I’ve written about?” Pause, hold for one second, and then… “Okay, I’ll do it.”

“Great,” they said.

“How long do I have to write it?” I asked.

“One month,” they chorused.

At least it was a month with 31 days; I had all of March to create the book that was supposed to set Victorian England on its ear. Gee whiz, thanks guys; generous!

Last Days of a Rake CoverBut I did it… wrote a novella in one month: 16,000 plus words. And as a result, The Last Days of a Rake is being offered as a free download, so that readers of Love & Scandal will have a better idea of what Charles Jameson related to in the book, that made him want to meet the author.

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Abridged excerpt from The Last Days of a Rake:

When one is looking forward, the days of youth seem to stretch out along a shining path to forever. Once one is past them, though, the path behind contracts until, from the other end, it appears the merest garden walk, a few steps from the sheltering doorway of youth to the squalid dead-end street of fate. The beginning of a life journey is full of promise, and rarely is any destination forecast.

It was June of 1811; to Edgar Godolphin Lankin, the path ahead gleamed gold…

The night he met Susan he was as drunk as a young man should be after two bottles of claret and one of hock. But his mind was clearing, since he had cast up his accounts in the ornamental bushes on his way into Lady Phoenicia’s gala event in honor of the new Regent at her Mayfair home.

The air that night was crisp and light, fully as intoxicating as wine, and Lankin, in the company of another frivolous—if poorer—young man, was of a mind for mischief. Old cats and society dragons frowned in disapproval as Lankin and his friend lounged into the festivity, leering at exposed bosoms and surreptitiously patting bottoms in the most insolent manner. The fashion of the day for ladies was such that leering and patting, though uninvited, was rewarding. But after a half hour spent in such pleasantries, both were becoming bored.

“Lankin, let us get out of this place,” Felix Bellwether said, finally, after they had shocked their quota of old people.

Lankin was ready to go, for there were yet ancient watchmen to box and carriage horses to torment. But as fate would have it, he saw, that moment, descending the steps to the ballroom, (more…)